55 word short story V.3

The Accident
“Jake stop the ball”
“Ok”
“Hurry up it crossed the street”
“I will! Jeez.”

“Got it Mark”
‘’Ok, I’m gonna get a drink’’
‘’Be right there’’

SCREEEEEECH! CRASH!!

‘’Jake!’’
‘’Mark I cant feel anything’’
‘’Your bleeding out of your head. I’ll go get mom’’
‘’Mark I’m gonna die’’
‘’Hold on Jake, I cant lose you!’’

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55 word short story V.2

The Accident

“Jake stop the ball”

“Ok”

“Remember to look both ways”

“I will! Jeez”

“Got it Mark”

‘’Ok, I’m gonna go get a drink’’

‘’Be right there’’

SCREEEEEECH! CRASH!!

‘’Jake!’’

‘’Mark I cant feel anything’’

‘’Your bleeding out of your head. Just stay calm’’

‘’Mark I’m gonna die’’

‘’Jake don’t say that! I wont lose you’’

55 word short story V.1

The Accident

Jake stop the ball

Ok

Remember to look both ways

I will! Jeez

Got it Mark

Ok, I’m gonna go get a drink

Be right there

SCREEEEEECH! CRASH!!

Jake!

Mark I cant feel anything

Your bleeding out of your head. Just stay calm

Mark I’m gonna die

Jake don’t say that! I wont lose you

What I needed to say V.3

Silence

My mouth wouldn’t open

Lungs filled with tar dripping, dripping

Why don’t I make a noise

Say it now or you never will again

Silence

Then she left, my chance gone

Never a retry, never, never

It haunts me with its darkness

Brings my nightmares to life

I love you, 3 words couldn’t exit my mouth

My lips trembling, I cryed over her whit, lifeless body

I could say it now

But she’d never hear it

I needed to say it, She needed to hear it

But I stood like I’d just seen a walking dead

Mouth shut with fear, no strength

I say It now but it means nothing

I will never leave anything to Silence

But right now Silence means everything

What I needed to say V.2

Silence

My mouth wouldn’t open

Lungs filled with tar dripping, dripping

Why don’t I make a noise

Say it now or you never will again

Silence

Then she left, my chance gone

Never a retry, nor a replay

It haunts me with its darkness

Brings my nightmares to life

I love you, 3 words couldn’t exit my mouth

My lips trembling, I cryed over her

I could say it now

But she’d never hear it

I needed to say it, She needed to hear it

But I stood like I’d just seen a walking dead

Mouth shut with fear, no strength

I say It now but it means nothing

I will never leave anything to Silence

But right now Silence means everything

What I needed to say V.1

Silence

My mouth wouldn’t open

Lungs filled with tar dripping, dripping

Why don’t I make a noise

Say it now or you never will again

Silence

Then she left, my chance gone

Never a retry, nor a replay

It haunts me with its darkness

Takes me to places I never wanted to go

I love you, 3 words couldn’t exit my mouth

My lips trembling, I cryed over her

I could say it now

But she’d never hear it

I needed to say it, She needed to hear it

But I stood like I’d just seen a walking dead

Mouth shut with fear, no strength

I say It now but it means nothing

Now more than ever silence means everything