Friday, March 20, 2009

55 word short story V.3

The Accident
“Jake stop the ball”
“Ok”
“Hurry up it crossed the street”
“I will! Jeez.”

“Got it Mark”
‘’Ok, I’m gonna get a drink’’
‘’Be right there’’

SCREEEEEECH! CRASH!!

‘’Jake!’’
‘’Mark I cant feel anything’’
‘’Your bleeding out of your head. I’ll go get mom’’
‘’Mark I’m gonna die’’
‘’Hold on Jake, I cant lose you!’’

1 comment:

  1. This is really good but yet sad. I sometimes get confused on who's talking but its in the context so. I hope this story is made up though. :(

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