The Accident
“Jake stop the ball”
“Ok”
“Hurry up it crossed the street”
“I will! Jeez.”
“Got it Mark”
‘’Ok, I’m gonna get a drink’’
‘’Be right there’’
SCREEEEEECH! CRASH!!
‘’Jake!’’
‘’Mark I cant feel anything’’
‘’Your bleeding out of your head. I’ll go get mom’’
‘’Mark I’m gonna die’’
‘’Hold on Jake, I cant lose you!’’
Friday, March 20, 2009
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This is really good but yet sad. I sometimes get confused on who's talking but its in the context so. I hope this story is made up though. :(
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