Alex: Man its as cold as a well diggers butt hole outside
Craig: Haha really Alex? How would you know what that feels like?
Alex: Shut up Craig
Kayla: Hey guys! Whats up?
Craig: Not a lot since 2 minutes ago when you were with us. Haha
Alex: Haha
Kayla: Oh ok, well do you guys wanna sit? Or just stand there
Alex: We’ll sit, Hey Jake
Jake: Oh hey guys sorry I was zoning out Haha
Craig: I noticed, so what were you guys doin before we got here?
Kayla: Sitting, and waiting for you guys.
Alex: Oh ya I forgot we are the party aren’t we haha
Craig: Oh ya almost forgot
Jake: I’m hungry lets go get something to eat
Alex: In a lil bit Jake. Can’t you wait?
Jake: Noooo im a hungry hungry man!
Alex: Ok well wait a sec
Craig: Alright well are you guys excited to go out again
Kayla: Yes!!! This is so much fun!
Craig: I agree. How about you Jake?
Jake: I’m gonna eat this table that’s what I think!
Craig: Ok? Well I guess Jake is non responsive until he gets his food haha
Jake: Well no duh its like wanting a pencil to work without an eraser
(Craig, Alex, Kayla all just stare at Jake)
Alex: What does that even mean?
Jake: I don’t know, I just thought it up and threw it out there
Alex: Well you shouldn’t say that ever again
Craig: Ok. Well on a new subject Jake you wanna go get some food?
Jake: YES! Lets go
(Jake and Craig go get food. Kayla and Alex stay sitting)
Kayla: So should we ask him?
Alex: Yea, I think so. Its been bugging me for awhile
Kayla: Do you think he’ll let us ask?
Alex: I don’t know, but we have to try
Kayla: Ya well who’s gonna start?
Alex: You can ill follow you up
Kayla: Ok hold on let me text Jake tell him were gonna do it
Alex: Alright
Kayla: I hope it goes well
Alex: Yea me too
Kayla: I loved his mom
Alex: Me too
(In walk Jake and Craig)
Craig: That was pretty good wasn’t it?
Jake: Yes thank you for coming with
Craig: Ha anytime bud
Alex: Hey guys welcome back
Craig: Thank you good sir. You guys wanna go back out soon?
Alex: In a lil bit
(Craig and Jake sit. Akward silence)
Kayla: Ok well Craig we gotta talk about something
Craig: Alright, well whats it about?
Kayla: Ok well ever since your mom passed you seem to have pretty much forgotten about her.
Its like “we” don’t understand how you can just forget
Craig: You think I forgot about her? How could I do that when I stood over her dead body and had to tell her goodbye? Even though the last time I talked to her I told her I hated her? Tell me how could I forget something like that?
Kayla: Oh…
Craig: I had so much hate inside me when it happened. The knowing that the last thing you told your mom wasn’t I love you, it was I hate you. Tell me how I can forgive myself for that?
Alex: Craig, why didn’t you tell us earlier? Were all your best friends and were here to help
Craig: Yea I know… but I didn’t want to burden you guys with this
Jake: Craig how is it a burden to help a best friend get over a loss?
Craig: I don’t know.. I shoulda told you guys
Alex: You look like you have more to say
Craig: Because I do, so when I went into the waiting room after telling her bye, her best friend comes up to me and tells me the last thing she told her before she went into surgery…
(Craig gets emotional)
She told her to tell her oldest on that she loves him and she doesn’t care what I say she’ll always love me. I was crushed. I didn’t deserve to be loved like that.
Kayla: Craig your mom was my best friend, and she told me how much she loved you all the time. You were her first born and you were her first baby boy
Alex: Craig, She knows you loved her. That’s what she will remember you for. The good times not the bad. Craig you have to tell us these things, we’ll help you
Craig: Yea, I see that now. Thanks guys you’re the best
Jake: Wait I have something to say
(Alex, Craig, and Kayla all look at Jake)
Jake: Craig your mom was a great woman and you cant blame yourself for saying what you said, It happens. But what you can do is help her by taking care of your brothers, and helping your dad through this. Its gonna be just as hard for him as it is for you. Its your chance to make things right Craig are you gonna do it? Or not.
Craig: Wow, thanks Jake I needed that
Kayla: Ok guys come her group hug
Alex: Oh your squishing my pelvis
Craig: Shut up Alex
Jake: Man im hungry
Alex: You can wait Jake haha
Kayla: Do you guys wanna go back out?
All the Guys: Yes!!!!!!
Kayla: Alright lets kick it
( Jake and Alex walk off stage, Kayla and Craig stay)
Craig: Kayla wait, My mom loved you like her daughter she never got. And I just wanted you to know she left you a note to read
Kayla: Thanks Craig, I love you bud
Craig: Love you too sister from another mister
The End
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ReplyDeleteThat's really touching .
ReplyDeleteIt feels like I know all the characters .
That's really touching.
ReplyDeleteIt feels like I know every character.
Cool , Adam .
ReplyDeleteWOW! this is amazing! I don't even remember saying most of it, but u can tell its me "man its as cold as a well diggers butthole outside". I do say that a lot. A genius at his finest hour. John Wayne after he saved the day from the angry indians and the bandit cowboys. Its like Pichasso meets Beethoven while fighting over King Tuts tomb with the holy grail and excalibur versus the army of Troy led by Leonitas.. That's pretty good.
ReplyDeleteGood plot.
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